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Marushia
5th February 2005, 08:49 AM
1I changed some of the colors and names of things, but all the new stuff is in crimson.

Link to Last Spar/Quest (http://www.giveupalready.com/showthread.php?p=178969#post178969)

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Index

Basic Info
History | Character Flaw | A Hard Case to Crack | Selling Your Soul | Angels Divine
Abilities
Inventory
Journal

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Basic Info




Name: Ray/Rei Ghost


Aliases: Petenshi Yurei (The Fake Ghost), Soul Eater, Soul Assassin, Soul Stealer

Race: Human, Soul Eater (Sub-genre of vampirism)
Age: ~25 (Human Earth Years)
Height: ~5'7"
Weight: ~156lbs.

Eye Color: Ranging from bluish-grey to black
Hair Color: Midnight Black, Shoulder Length
Appearance: Gothic look with black, tattered, leather cape and black, steel-toed boots. Under his black trench-coat, Rei wears a teal blue shirt with an ethereal manta ray silhouetted on it in evil purple.

Religion: Most accurately, some hybrid variant of Monotheism, Philosophy, and various ancient mythos.
Location: Sayarin Mountains, Naslyum
Home: Rei is formerly from a habitable planet in another galaxy. See history.
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History:


Character Flaw



Sometime in the near future, there exists a young man by the name of Ray Ghost. He is twenty-three years of age and it is on this day that we, the people who knew him best, do remember his tragic and unwarranted end.


Ray was such a cheery soul as a boy. He was a good Christian with a generous heart filled with love. Intelligence and talent were his companions and he never failed to leave a good impression on the majority of people he came in contact with. He was a bit unusual. He seemed to isolate himself from the rest of the group, either studying or socializing with his few close friends. He made more friends among adults than among his peers. I suppose he would have been better off being born one generation before his time. Nearly everyone who met him said he was practically the role model child.

That all changed as Ray entered into High School. It was there that he faced reality and learned many harsh truths. Over a steady four years' time, the lessons he learned slowly widdled away at his being. Slowly, everything he had learned and believed as a child became questioned or shot down. He began to diverge from his faith, started acting more delinquent, and eventually lost the stunning reputation he had made for himself.

The hardest lesson taught to Ray was that no one really gave a damn about him. All the praise that was given him was totally insincere. From that point on, Ray became an outcast in society, shunned by any and all around him. He had come to learn that to be human meant to be cold, emotionless, and, overall, without a heart or soul. No where did this hold more meaning than when Ray first fell in love for the most beautiful girl in his school. Her name was Elah. Elah had always treated Ray with kindness and even seemed to flirt with him. Ray made a decision to ask Elah out but, when he finally did, the she replied: "Hah! Why on earth would anyone want to love you?"

This rejection was like a knife in Ray's heart that could not be removed. It pained him day and night. For weeks, even months, Ray wallowed in anguish and misery as he contemplated morality and love and what they really meant. It was at his lowest point that Ray Ghost finally found the answers he so desperately sought.

Several years passed and Ray and Elah both went on to college. They hadn't seen each other since graduation. Ray sent a letter inviting Elah to come to a New Year's party. Having grown a little older, Elah sent a reply saying that she would be delighted to go. The two met outside an abandoned apartment building where the party was to take place. By this time, Ray had undergone a total transformation of himself. He seemed calm, collected, and confidant. His attire had changed from that of a childish outfit to one more serious, seductive, and mysterious. He called it his "half-goth" look since he wore all black, but without the make-up.

Ray reached out his hand to escort Elah upstairs to where the party was. As they ascended the disrepaired staircase, Ray's guest began to grow nervous. It felt more like walking into a haunted house, but it was not even Halloween. As the two made their way up the creaking flights, Ray rambled on about how he had found enlightenment and that he was a totally transformed man from the one he was formerly. This only served to make Elah more afraid.

As they reached the top of the stairs, the sounds of loud music and strobe lights emanated from a door that half hung on its hinges. "You'll like this," Ray told Elah as he stopped just before the door, "Trust me." The instant they remained there seemed like an eternity for Elah. Her face began to turn white with fear. Something didn't seem right about all of this.

Ray opened the door. It would have creeked if not otherwise drowned out by the loud and satanic music coming from within. He then entered into a shamble of a room with boarded windows and cracked walls. In the midst of everything was a massive orgy of about a dozen people. Ray's eyes flashed about the room, taking in the cumulatively grotesque sight in its entirety as he walked towards the center of a large green carpet. Elah followed behind, now terrified, being dragged by the arm by Ray until he suddenly came to a stop. His head hung low, as if in regret. Elah turned to look at him. She was overcome with a feeling most closely described as pity.

She was about to speak when Ray turned up his head. His eyes were still closed. "You stupid fools," he muttered, "You selfish, lustful, arrogant bastards!" His tone and volume increased. Ray then drew a small knife from his pocket and threw it into the speaker from which the noise emanated. In a burst of sparks, it ceased playing. Ray then repeated the phrase, loud enough for everyone to hear.

"You stupid, selfish, lustful, arrogant wastes of human existence! What on earth or in hell are you doing? You're like viruses. You live only to consume and perpetuate your own pitiful existence." In an exhibition of rage, Ray toppled a nearby table that had been the support of various alcoholic beverages. The vile fluid crawled along the wooden floor and down through some of the cracks in it. He then withdrew a lighter from his pocket and, in a sickening smile, said "Well, if you're all the disease ... then I'm the cure."

As he finished these words, he ignited his lighter and let it drop to the floor. The alcohol immediately caught flame and began spreading to all those orgy members that were in the room. Through his peripheral vision, Ray caught the motion of two people trying to escape out the only door. "Oh no you don't," shouted Ray as he kicked an unbroken bottle of wine towards them. It shattered and burst into flames, as did the two victims. Ray let out a sadistic laugh as he watched the sinners burn and cry out in the fires. He then pulled out an elaborately designed dagger and proceeded to slash the burning people with it.

At the sight of all this, Elah dropped to her knees and began unleashing rivers of tears. "What do you think, Elah?" asked Ray, "I told you you'd enjoy it."

"How could you do something so heartless, so inhuman?" she asked in reply to Ray who had now turned his back to her. Ray said nothing for a while as smoke began to fill the room, but not before escaping out the boarded windows. Presently, Ray spoke. "Heartless, you say? You say that what I'm doing is heartless? Funny, I still have a pulse, which must mean I still have a heart and that means it must not be a heartless act, but in fact a just one. But if you say it is heartless, then allow me to make that the truth!"

With the will of a berserker, Ray grabbed his chest and pressed hard in between his ribs until his fingers pierced through them and blood spurted out of the orifices. He reached into his chest cavity, pushing his ribs aside, and grabbed his heart. He could feel its pulsing gushiness beating in his grip and with one hefty tug, ripped it clear out of his body breaking all the major blood vessels attached to it. He stood stiff with the same sadistic smile as he held up his heart in his hand.

"Here, I offered you my heart before and I offer it again. You can have my heart. Where I'm going ... I won't be needing it!" And with his last bit of energy, Ray through his heart towards Elah. It flew past the poor, traumatized girl and dripped blood on her as it sailed for a head on collision with the opposite wall. There it splattered in bloody chaos and stuck to the wall as blood dripped down around it and dried quickly from the immense heat, staining the painted surface and the brick behind its cracked portion.

Ray looked up and smiled but his countenance quickly changed to stunned as he felt the last of his energy had been depleted. He fell to one knee and tried to prop himself up with his hands but without success. Ray's strength gave out and his body crashed dead on the floor. A tongue of flame caught the tip of his trench coat and spread across his body, enveloping him in fire as the last of his blood drained from his body. It was on this day that Ray Ghost died and set himself upon a pyre with the rest of the souls whom he had claimed that day.8
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A Hard Case to Crack



"Uh, where am I?" It was dark at first. Then, as his eyes slowly opened, he saw a wavy blur of black and grey. His eyes then focused and adjusted to the light. "Uh? Where am I?"


Ray Ghost sat curled up off by himself. He turned his head to look around. All that he could see was an endless plain covered with a low mist. A grey aura hung about the air. Ray felt no fear, nor joy, nor sadness. He felt no stress or peace. He simply felt ... normal. Ray picked himself up from the ground which seemed to be a solid slab of marble or slate. He was dressed in the same attire that he had worn the day of his death, but it was whole, not burnt at all, except for his leather cape which was torn to begin with. "Wow! This is wierd."

Ray then noticed one thing was different about him. Instead of a black shirt, he wore a teal blue shirt with a wavy symbol in indigo that he could not distinguish, but he thought it looked sort of like a manta ray. For the most part, he seemed entirely whole.

The shadow of some figure approaching grew clearer through the haze until it drew near enough to become distinguishable. Ray stepped back as he saw that the being who came towards him was an oni (ogre), blue-skinned and very solemn. He motioned for the human to follow him. Not knowing what else to do, Ray followed obediantly.

As the human and his demon guide traveled across the plane, Ray noticed that the fog had started lifting. All that remained of it was a thin layer of mist no higher than a foot or two above the ground. The two came upon a group of beings who sat crouched down low to the ground. The majority of their features were hidden by shadows, but they looked fairly human with long grey and blue hair, fair skin, and transluscent-blue eyes. Ray stared in awe of them, seemingly lost in a trance. *Snap!* He was shocked back into consciousness.

"I thought that might get your attention," came an ominous voice.

"Who's there?" called Ray as he searched for the source of the sound.

"Hehehe, as time goes by, you humans become more forgetful of the fact that magic is still an integral part of this universe."

As Ray turned back around, he saw a man dressed all in black with hair half black, half white, standing right in front of him. "That makes it all the easier to fool and surprise you," he said. Ray was taken aback. "Where the hell did you come from?" he asked. "Certainly not from hell, nor heaven for that matter, or any planet in the Earthly Plane."

"What? Look, never mind. Just, where am I and how did I get here?"

"Hmm, interesting. Usually the next question people ask is: 'Who are you?'"

"Alright, then. Who are you? Where am I? How did I ..."

The being interrupted him, holding up his hand. "I am known by many names and aliases in all of the tongues in this universe. But for all intensive purposes, you may refer to me as Spectral. I am neither with nor against heaven or hell. Rather, I am the one who prevents them from killing each other off before the predetermined date of the Apocalypse and the final battle. I am the Guardian of the Balance between Good and Evil and you are in my domain."

Ray's eyes lit up at this last part. Spectral continued: "You are, or were, a Christian, right?"

"Er, yeah," replied Ray.

"Then you must know Hell's design, having no doubt read 'The Comedy.' I say this because that is typically how your placement here is considered, but yours is, not so much a unique case, as it is a rare and interesting case. I get bored so easily so anything out of the ordinary peaks my interest, which is why I chose to take your case personally. Right now, the task is figuring out what to do with you."

"What do you mean 'what to do with me?'"

Spectral ignored this question and just stood ther with his hand on his chin going over the events of Ray's life. "Hmm, well you have to many sins on your head to get into heaven." He turned to Ray. " Are you sorry for killing those people?"

A look of determination and resillience came to the human's countenance. "Everyone of them deserved what they got. I have no regrets about that."

"Hmm, point taken. So purgatory is out. You've been baptized, so Limbo is also out of the question. Have you ever lusted?"

"Is flatulance habitual?" retorted Ray.

Spectral luaghed. "Hmm, you have a sense of humor. That's good. I'll take that as a yes. So possible candidate for the Hurricane. Gluttony, no. Reckless spending, not really. Hmm, while you definitely could go to Level 5, I'm not sure whether you'd be put under wrathful or sullen. Sullenness more likely."

"Sullen? Why?" Ray inquired.

"Well, you see, it's rather a complicated thing. You killed those people, certainly, but really only one of them was innocent. The others have all recieved their just desserts. However, I would not be so quick to put you among the sullen, considerring it was the result of injustices done to you. However, that doesn't mean you get off scott-free. Since you've taken your own life, that would normally land you in the Woods of the Suicides."

"So I'm to spend eternity warding off harpies while hanging from some stupid hell tree?"

"Not exactly. Note, I said 'normally,' but your case is far from normal. You took your own life, that is true, but you also took the life of an innocent. Your governments generally punish such barbarism with capital punishment as the only way to pay for taking a life is to give one back. The higher powers, too, follow such a rule, so in taking your own life, you've repaid a life debt."

Ray was now lost by Spectral's explaination. So many components that made up one insignificant life such as his. He wondered how it was possible that Spectral knew all of this, but then came to realize that he must have some sort of omnipotence. Ray did his best to follow as Spectral continued.
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Selling your Soul



The Balance Guardian paused for a moment and paced about. Ray followed him with his eyes. "You still haven't answered any of my questions yet, Guardian." Spectral stopped mid-stride and looked wide-eyed at his client. "I'm sorry, did you say something? I could have sworn you spoke to me. Lest you forget, your fate lies in my hands and I could have you sent to the Malebolge on a whim if I felt like it.


"Speaking of which, that brings me to your next two crimes: deceit and trechery. Deceit and trechery land you in Levels 8 and 9, respectively, also known as the Malebolge and Cocyctus, respectively. Heh, decieving and betraying poor Elah like that. For shame, and I thought you loved her."

"I did ... once," answered Ray, his head turned down, "But that was before ..."

"Before what?" Spectral pressed. Ray grabbed his chest where the manta ray emblem was. He felt a chill come over him. "Interesting," noted Spectral, "you've no heart, yet you still feel the pain of heartbreak."

Ray snapped back into a defensive state of mind, his eyes glared towards the Guardian and his feet were rooted in the same place they had been throughout his judgement.

"Hehe, that emblem on your shirt, Ray, is the same mark that your blood made after splattering your heart against the wall of that apartment. The blood dripped down in that same shape. Some coincidence how it looks like a manta ray and that your name is also 'Ray.' What's also interesting is that it looks much like a ghost, as well, which is not only reflective of your last name but also of the fact that 'Rei' in Japanese means 'ghost' or 'spirit.'"

Ray thought about this for a moment and marveled at the coincidence.

Spectral continued: "You are a very strange case, indeed, Ray. I think that, out of all the tortures, the Woods of the Suicides is the worst and perhaps also the most appropriate for you. However, I have a proposition for you. As the Balance Guardian, it is my duty to maintain universal balance between good and evil through whatever means necessary. Even I cannot perform all the tasks needed to ensure its true equilibrium, but then, true equilibrium is not necessary. So, what I generally do is enlist the aide of those who possess certain talents. These individuals then do what I generally cannot while I oversee them and only step in if necessary. So, here's the deal. I will grant you a new life filled with unlimited potential for power and in exchange, you will perform the tasks I asssign to you until our contract is terminated."

"What happens after that?" asked Ray.

"Well, that depends upon the contract. Generally, you are free to do whatever you wish after that," the Guardian answered.

"Then, I'd have to see the details of this contract."

Spectral bowed his head and smiled. "Hmm, already it seems you're learning from your mistakes. You know not to gamble with your life without knowing what will happen after. That means you're not stupid and that's a very good thing."

With the wave of his hand, Spectral caused a piece of parchment paper to appear out of no where and hang in mid-air. On it was written the conditions of the contract. Spectral read it aloud:


Upon my signing of this contract, I, ____, do hereby agree to the following conditions:

I shall perform all requested duties as required of me by the Balance Guardian, Spectral, until the time of my death or contract termination and, in exchange, shall become a Soul Eater.

By becoming a Soul Eater, I, the afore mentioned, claim responsibility for the death of the first 1,000 beings that I kill and may, if I so choose, take their souls for my own, at which time, I shall be endowed with new power. If, for any reason, the soul of my victim is not consumed within a period of 24 hours, I forfeit all rights and powers as pertaining to that particular soul. Should I choose to, I may, at anytime, release a soul's power from my control.

At the time of contract termination, the measure of each soul which I have claimed will be weighed and I shall henceforth be judged accordingly.
Spectral took a deep breath as he finished. "There you go, that's our contract. And before you ask, this is the best I can do. I cannot grant you your life back forever."

"Good," said Ray as he finished re-reading over the contract, "I wouldn't have it any other way. How long until contract termination?"

"Eight years, or until you die, whichever comes first. And after that, each soul you've taken will count towards my final decision of where to place you."

Ray seemed skeptical. "Gee, I don't know. Usually, there is some sort of fine print."

"Trust me, Ray. This is the only way out or else I'll make my decision now. Who knows, you may even manage to get into heaven."

At the sound of this, Ray's eyes glistened. "Alright, but I want a new name to go with this new life," he said. "Sure," said Spectral, "whatever name you sign will become your new name for as long as this contract remains."

With that, Ray Ghost signed his new name: R-E-I. As soon as he had completed the last letter, the contract rolled itself up and vanished in a flash. "Then we have a deal," said the Guardian, "From now on, you shall do as I say. From now on, you shall be known as 'Petenshi Yurei, Rei, Eater of Souls.' The title 'petenshi yurei' means 'fake ghost.' A fitting title considering you are now neither living, nor dead."

"Alright, so I signed your damned contract. Now what?"

"Now, I fulfill my part of the deal."
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Marushia
5th February 2005, 09:03 AM
10History (Cont'd)


Angels Divine



Spectral reached out his hand and a book appeared in it. It looked old with a brown leather-like cover. A lone eye rested on the center of its front. He handed the book to Rei. "This," he began, "Is known as the Book of Knowledge. It was made soon after the time of Adam and Eve. God sent the Powers (warrior angels) from heaven to cut down the Tree of Knowledge. I then sent my own minions out to retrieve the tree and create the pages of this book from its pulp. It's yours, now, until our contract terminates, to be your tool and to aide you."


Rei took the book and opened it. To his surprise, there was nothing but blank pages inside. "How is this supposed to help me?" he cried.

"Ask it a question," said Spectral. "ask it about your powers."

"Huh? What powers." As these words left Rei's tongue, the pages began to bleed black until coherent words and sentences formed:


The powers you were promised when you signed the contract, stupid.

"Oh my," said Spectral, "It seems to not like you very much. Well, that's a shame because this book has a mind of its own and can tell you anything, but only if it feels like it."

"That's just great," replied a rather displeased Rei. "So how am I supposed to learn?" The book bled again.


By getting on my good side and not making an ass of yourself.

The letters faded back into their pages. "What did you just say?!" Rei shouted to it. The book bled once more, this time with an image of a face sticking its tongue out.

"You stupid piece of crap! I'll tear out your pages and burn them!" Rei was now in a fit of rage and exhausted all his energy trying to tear out the pages, but without success. "Alright, you win."

"Glad to see you're getting along so well," said Spectral with a hint of sarcasm, "I say that because I've already come up with a job for you. You may have recalled seeing some creepy looking figures when you first came into consciousness."

Rei thought for a moment and suddenly remembered the very beings that the Guardian was talking about. It gave him chills just visualising them.

"Well, I hope you found them interesting because I'll be sending you to a planet full of them."

"What?!" exclaimed Rei.

"Hey, remember, you signed over your service to me, but don't worry, you won't go unarmed. Remember your contract stated that in becoming a Soul Eater, you gain new powers for every soul you consume. Well, the first soul is yours and that one grants you the power to consume souls. The other lives you took, their souls also are yours. You'll first have to get used to your new powers before you can use them, however."

"Well, that's just great," commented Rei, "Why am I not surprised? Alright, so where am I going and how do I use these powers?"

"You are going to a planet in a galaxy far from your own known as Terrak'Lina. There are creatures, called the Divine Guardians, like the ones you saw here, who have gotten out of hand and are starting a mass genocide of the planet. I need someone to help stop their chaotic crusaide before they wipe out all life on Terrak'Lina."

Rei raised an eyebrow in a very skeptic look. How could he possibly stop what even this Balance Guardian claimed he couldn't do? Not to mention that he still had no knowledge of his powers or of this Terrak'Lina or even of this enemy known as the Divine Guardians. "And just how am I supposed to do that?" he asked.

Spectral pointed to the Book of Knowledge. "That book will tell you everything you need to know, again, provided it's willing. I suggest you treat it well. You should spend the next few days here learning all you can about your powers and how to use them and also about the history of Terrak'Lina. That knowledge will be most invaluable." The Guardian turned and began to walk away along the grey plane into the now rethickenning mist. "When you've learned enough, I'll warp you to a part of the planet that has so far been least affected by these renegade angels. Until then, learn all you can."

Spectral stopped in his tracks and turned to look back at Rei who was now sitting on the floor with the Book of Knowledge in hand. "Oh," he said with a most serious look, "and be sure to protect the ethereal manta ray. If you don't, .... well, just do it. I'll be back in one week's time to open the portal to Terrak'Lina. Be ready by then." And with that, Spectral continued until he was completely out of sight.

Rei took a moment to gather his wits about him before openning up the ancient book. "Well, let's get started, then."
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Abilities and Skills:




Name: Basic Dagger Skill (low)

Description: Rei is capable of combat against a single lightly armed/armored opponent using a knife. He is equally skilled at fighting with them as he is at throwing them.
Flavor: "So, you don't think I can kick your ass, eh? Allow me to prove you wrong."


Name: Soul Eating
Description: Rei has the ability to steal a being's essence (i.e., their soul) and add it to his own skills inventory. This is done by piercing the victim's heart and extracting their essence stored there. Rei then gains powers determined by the characteristics of the victim's soul.

Level 1 -(low) Soul Pilaging: In order for Rei to steal a being's soul, his victim must be close to death, paralyzed, or unconscious in order for Rei get close enough to use this technique.

Flavor: "I traded in my heart for countless souls. Yours is just one of many that will soon be mine."


Name: Flaming Weapons
Description: By tapping into the power of certain crimson souls, Rei can channel energy through his body into a weapon and cause it to become shrouded in flames.

Level 1 -(low) Flaming Dagger: The night of his death, Rei took the life of a violent person. This person's soul was crimson in color to represent his violent acts in life. By tapping into the power this soul provides, Rei can channel energy into a dagger, causing it to become enshrouded in flames.At it’s current level, the daggers can only endure the flames for a short while before it begins deforming the shape of the metal. Because the flames are still weak, the daggers can deal a small amount of damage when set ablaze.


Level 2 -(Moderate) Flaming Knife: The night of his death, Rei took the life of a violent person. This person's soul was crimson in color to represent his violent acts in life. By tapping into the power this soul provides, Rei can channel energy into a throwing knife, causing it to become enshrouded in flames. The knife stays ignited until just after it implants itself in a target.The knife can deal moderate damage when thrown at the enemy.


Flavor: "I think you'll rather enjoy this technique. I 'aquired' it from a man who, in his day, was a notorious assassin. I'm sure he would have wanted you to be killed by it.
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Inventory:




Name: Tome of Knowledge*

Description: A book filled with blank pages. The cover (http://www.kevinslair.com/images/thumb2.php/BBBUE8.jpg) is made of a brown, leathery material with a decorative design and a large eye in the center of its front. The paper was made from the wood of the Tree of Knowledge (from the Garden of Eden). Words and images bleed black (not just a metaphor) onto it's pages when asked a question as its way of giving a response to questions asked of it. The book, however, it very picky and tends to only answer when it feels like it. There are many instances where the Tome of Knowledge is forbidden to reveal certain information and will let its reader know if this is the case.
Origin: Rei was given the Tome of Knowledge during his short stay in hell. It was meant to be used as both a training guide for his powers as well as an all purpose reference guide. The tome is virtually indestructible (though it can be destroyed, the book will not reveal its own weaknesses out of fear for its own existence) and can only be used by its owner (currently Rei)until either they die or until the book is given away freely. Upon receiving it, Rei and the book got off to a rather sour relationship resulting in the Tome of Knowledge not always cooperating with its owner.

Currently, Rei's usage of the Tome of Knowledge is several limited and extends only as far as:

Identities of species that Rei encounters
Orienteering and Directing
Cartography (Maps)
The History of Terrak'Lina

Recording Data

Name: Ritual Dagger
Description: A medium-sized, sterling silver dagger with a curved-diamond-shaped blade. The handle is gold-plated and rather elaborate.
Origin: Rei purchased this dagger in his former life and used it in a ritual murdering of several people, all of whose souls now belong to him.


Name: Med Kit (x1.5)
Description: A small first aide kit. Good for minor injuries. Contains bandages, sterile gauze, ointments, etc.
Origin: Rei always keeps a first aide kit on his person in case of emergencies.


Name: Throwing Knives (x5)
Description: Small, steel daggers used for throwing.
Origin: Rei purchased these dagger in his former life and used them in a ritual murdering of several people, all of whose souls now belong to him.


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*Notes on the Tome of Knowledge:




Ok, let me try to clarify for the mods:


History:

The people of T'L are all told stories and can read books of the history of T'L and thus have a general sense of their own past as a people. That's about as much as Rei has, if not a little less. He has a basic idea of the role humans played in Lina's past and a few other note worthy things (like the Great War in Deskin that took place before the DG arrived).

Navigation:

T'L does not sell compasses in any of your shops. I doubt it'd be such a big deal if Rei had one. Besides that, people can just look at the stars or the sun/moon to get a sense of direction. Rei is not familiar with these things, however, since he is not from T'L. This provides him with a sense of direction that the people of T'L already have gained through just the experience of being on their own planet.

Maps:

Anyone in T'L who's read their own history should have come across maps at some point. They know the layout of the continents and where the important cities are. That's about the extent of the maps available to Rei at this point.

All in all, Rei is not from this planet, so he does not have the experience of living here and thus, identifying with the major points of T'L. It'd be no different than if he were born here and grew up with these things ingrained in his brain, as I pointed out already. Plus, he'd be lost without the book, so in that sense, he's actually worse off than the average citizen of T'L, so right there, it's already a limit.

Skill Teaching:

This just provides an IC reason for Rei to know how to use his own abilities. Really, that is no different than him already having instant knowledge of how to use his new skills, so that shouldn't be a problem.

Recording Data:

Pretty much just a log, journal, record, etc. of everything that Rei says or does.

As I told Jin, this is how Rei's usage of the book will start out. After going through quests and spars, he will earn the book's trust and be able to use it to a greater extent. This includes such things as upgrading to maps of a city's layout, more extensive background checks on people, plotting courses, etc. and will be gained in the form of requested upgrades. It is not a skill, it is an item. If anything, it's the equivalent of upgrading a weapon's material. (Sounds fine with us)
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Fame: 37pts
Status- Beggar

Blankwindow
7th February 2005, 01:24 AM
At a glance it looks fine but I'll do my job tomarro and edit this when im sure.

Jin_the_Legend
7th February 2005, 01:48 AM
I'll take it too. Shouldn't take long, considering it's an Update instead of a beginning char.

Blankwindow
7th February 2005, 10:51 AM
Finished and done. A few notes though

Notes:

*All edits were made in Orange

*We will always need to know the (strength or level) of each of you’re abilities/skills in OUR terms which is Low, Moderate and High. If you don’t put it in, us Mods will.

*Don’t forget also to always update your “Fame” which is your accumulated total of Exp points after each thread.

*“Recording Data” is considered a Request Reward, remember you must Request that in the Judgment Request thread, not the Earned Reward which are normally a/s. Since you are the first to do this, I know what you meant to do. And Hysteria is cool with it. But for now on don’t forget to list those kinds of Request Rewards in the Judgment Request thread. Because you won’t always get it, it’s up to the DS mod that judges your thread.

*I know you provided a link to your most recent thread, but you didn’t provide a link to your previous char profile. We would like that link at the top as well next time.

*Finally…congrats on being the very first Level 2 char within Divine Salvation. Now go kick some more Dg Ass!